After his ex-girlfriend's accident, young Manhattan investigator Jack Arthur is transferred to an independent detective agency in Nassau County. At the same time, up-and-coming mob boss Pinhead Miyamoto is determined to avenge the murder of his adopted father.
As the violent attacks on detectives and civilians increase, Jack is thrown into a violent rivalry with Miyamoto, finding he may be the only man able to keep the village from falling apart...
Updated unevenly. Warnings for violence and mild sexual situations.
I wuz framed!
Shame on me for not noticing that you're framing the panels with a straight-edge. Doing it free-hand works well with your more humourous material, but this story is a little more dramatic. Much better this way! Also, I see some nifty improvements in such things as the way you draw the backgrounds, and the shadows.
Clever use of product placement, too. I hope Likka rewards you handsomely!